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(Voting) Community Battle #54: Key to Beastly vs mfhoundoom (Gen 5 LU)

Discussion in 'Voting Section' started by smbcha (Derwin), Aug 20, 2013.

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  1. smbcha (Derwin)

    smbcha (Derwin) Battle Recorder & Editor

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    Narrated by Tyki!

    As usual, we would like to know what you thought about the battle and the narration.
    On a scale of 1 to 10 - 1 is terrible, 5 is average, and 10 is perfect - please vote on this.
    After voting, you are advised to post why you voted. It will NOT count if you don't.
     
  2. Tyki

    Tyki Change

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    Haha, this was my first narration in awhile, so I do admit there were some mistakes that are present.
     
  3. Aurist

    Aurist I do not jump for joy. I frolic in doubt.

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    no problems with narration from what i could tell. i think the sprites were made too thin and beastly's team were all labelled with the wrong name. otherwise a neat battle and a good video.
     
  4. PichiTheShinyPichu

    PichiTheShinyPichu I'm not amused

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    The battle was good, the narration was great, it's just that the main problem, like Aurist stated, is the mix-up with Beastly's Pokemon (like Excaviler being named as Uxie and vise versa).
     
  5. Laurel

    Laurel Well-Known Member

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    I gave you a 9 - comments are on the video!
     
  6. smbcha (Derwin)

    smbcha (Derwin) Battle Recorder & Editor

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  7. ThatIsWhatSheSaid

    ThatIsWhatSheSaid seasoned vet

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    Givin this an 8.

    I liked the battle a lot (hence why I approved it) and thought you guys did a fine job with it.
    Derwin as usual was solid, that was prolly the best narration I've heard from Tyki yet (no offense, wasn't a huge fan of your earlier ones but you've improved just in your confidence and delivery imo)

    My constructive criticism: slow down a little. The battle seemed quite choppy, since it was sped up and slowed down a lot to match the narration. I think its okay to slow down to explain key turns which you did a good job of, but for non key turns I thought you went way too fast. It made it a little hard to follow, you didn't even come close to hitting everything that happened and you missed a few key chances to comment on stuff. And I think that the frantic pace is what made you mis-speak on a few occasions.

    But yeah otherwise I thought it was a solid job.